Those are Great! 
Just recorded a demo...
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Staging Lane
Joined: Sep 2004
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From: Everett Washington
Just recorded a demo... Give em a listen and tell me what you think.
Its pretty mellow pop rock for the most part
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/track1.wma
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/Track2.wma
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/track3.wma
I'm just an amature having fun writing music
Its pretty mellow pop rock for the most part
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/track1.wma
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/Track2.wma
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/track3.wma
I'm just an amature having fun writing music
The first song link is "the single" - it's the strongest in my opinion. I think all of them are pretty good. You should try to get to play a bar in Seattle. These songs are every bit as good as what I've heard down there so you should be able to.
I like it - I'm a drummer and I liked the songs in general, nicely done for being a demo. The bridge on the 1st song is really cool man!
Do you play or sing on this band? What's the band's name? Props to you dude, I see great potential there.
Do you play or sing on this band? What's the band's name? Props to you dude, I see great potential there.
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Staging Lane
Joined: Sep 2004
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From: Everett Washington
Thanks dude,
My band is in a member transition at the moment so we aren't playing out at all.
Song 1 and 3 were wrote by yours truely and song 2 was a collective effort between myself and another guy in my group
My band is in a member transition at the moment so we aren't playing out at all.
Song 1 and 3 were wrote by yours truely and song 2 was a collective effort between myself and another guy in my group
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I liked all the songs, however I liked #3 best of all although it was pretty mellow. I play lead guitar/some keys and percussion in a local band ( Plan B ) and have been playing lead for about 25 years in such reknowned ( haha ! ) bands as "Luzanna Gallows", "The inflatable Dates", "Dead Ringer" and a few others. I liked the subtletys of some of the chording and the interaction between that and the percussion. Perhaps a little hotter bass lines during the turn arounds to help prop up the back beat would give it more punch ? Just a personal preferance thing on my part. I love playin' bass on funky R&B kind of stuff as well so take it for what it's worth 
Nice to know there's a few other musicians in this section. I learned to play my first song when I was 5 yrs old ( Hey Joe ), My older brothers who also play used to make me sing before my voice changed 'cuz I could hit the high notes
haha ! ) bands as "Luzanna Gallows", "The inflatable Dates", "Dead Ringer" and a few others. I liked the subtletys of some of the chording and the interaction between that and the percussion. Perhaps a little hotter bass lines during the turn arounds to help prop up the back beat would give it more punch ? Just a personal preferance thing on my part. I love playin' bass on funky R&B kind of stuff as well so take it for what it's worth Nice to know there's a few other musicians in this section. I learned to play my first song when I was 5 yrs old ( Hey Joe ), My older brothers who also play used to make me sing before my voice changed 'cuz I could hit the high notes
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Staging Lane
Joined: Sep 2004
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From: Everett Washington
thanks guys! Very valuable feedback!
As to is there any more material...
We just started laying down "Scratch" tracks for another one I guess you can check out...
"Scratch" meaing its still in production and doesn't sound like the others yet and we haven't added drums
Here ya go
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/T...Production.wma
As to is there any more material...
We just started laying down "Scratch" tracks for another one I guess you can check out...
"Scratch" meaing its still in production and doesn't sound like the others yet and we haven't added drums
Here ya go
http://home.wavecable.com/~03cobra/T...Production.wma
Ahhh nice! I couldn't help but come up with several different drum patterns in my head that would fit that song. That's very cool. I thought about something like rimshots on 1, 2, 3 and 4 at the first verses with some hi-hat patterns doubling what the acoustic guitar was doing...
Later on when the verse comes back just a straight snare on 2 and 4 that groooooooooves....... and some hi-hat work. Nice song there man!! People would totally dance to that!
Later on when the verse comes back just a straight snare on 2 and 4 that groooooooooves....... and some hi-hat work. Nice song there man!! People would totally dance to that!
