thesis sentence help quick please
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From: DFW, Allen
thesis sentence help quick please need to email my prof. a compare and contrast thesis by mid night how does this sound
Although there is great respect for the two true American late model muscle cars, the 2003 Ford Cobra and the Fourth generation GM F-body cars, there are also distinctions which allow each machine to stand on its own.
Although there is great respect for the two true American late model muscle cars, the 2003 Ford Cobra and the Fourth generation GM F-body cars, there are also distinctions which allow each machine to stand on its own.
Fourth doesn't need to be capitalized. That's a pretty broad thesis. I understand a thesis has to be broad enough to cover a wide range of issues, but it should be a bit more specific than that.
Also, speaking from experience, professors hate it when they are reading about something they don't know about. Unless your professor is a car enthusiast, he probably wouldn't know what a F-body is. Maybe just mention Camaro and Firebird?
Also, speaking from experience, professors hate it when they are reading about something they don't know about. Unless your professor is a car enthusiast, he probably wouldn't know what a F-body is. Maybe just mention Camaro and Firebird?
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Does it have to be over this topic? You might run out of material depending on the length of said paper.
Your first statement doesn't really correspond with the last. IE: It isn't implied that they are compared as being one and the same when you say they are "respected as late model muscle cars". You could remove "the" before "two true" and your statement would be more clear, but the connection is still missing. I don't know if any of that helps but good luck.
Your first statement doesn't really correspond with the last. IE: It isn't implied that they are compared as being one and the same when you say they are "respected as late model muscle cars". You could remove "the" before "two true" and your statement would be more clear, but the connection is still missing. I don't know if any of that helps but good luck.
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Fourth doesn't need to be capitalized. That's a pretty broad thesis. I understand a thesis has to be broad enough to cover a wide range of issues, but it should be a bit more specific than that.
Also, speaking from experience, professors hate it when they are reading about something they don't know about. Unless your professor is a car enthusiast, he probably wouldn't know what a F-body is. Maybe just mention Camaro and Firebird?
Also, speaking from experience, professors hate it when they are reading about something they don't know about. Unless your professor is a car enthusiast, he probably wouldn't know what a F-body is. Maybe just mention Camaro and Firebird?
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Damn, yea i was thinking of the camaro/firebird thing but then made it from my point of view of being a car guy and it just didnt seem right to leave out the fact that they're the same car... i should of changed it but allready sent it. but i think it will be ok final draft of this essay isnt due till thursday so i guess i can still change it up..
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Would be pretty funny to start mentioning cam sizes and flow numbers in your paper. Throw the professor way off.
