A commercial I did for class

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Mar 6, 2013 | 11:04 PM

RevsUnlimited

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A commercial I did for class

Hey everyone, hope you all are doing good. Anyways, recently I was assigned a video project in my economics class in which we had to do a commercial for a product. I had bigger plans for it but overall we got an A. This was put out in an afternoon but I really liked the first 40 seconds about and thought you all would enjoy. Thanks for watching!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NKrhJ...ature=youtu.be

Mar 7, 2013 | 11:01 PM

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I like it man, props.

Kinda wish it picked up a little or sent a message towards the end...

Mar 8, 2013 | 08:45 PM

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i like it. very good effort.

i say the ending could use some work.

Mar 8, 2013 | 10:48 PM

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Well done! I have to say my favorite part was at the end. I think it showed how happy people can be driving and doing things with something they love. I believe the ending was very original.

Mar 9, 2013 | 07:34 AM

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good start to it but was kinda a bland ending. was really waiting for some full throttle runs or burnouts at the end or something along those lines.

Mar 15, 2013 | 01:59 PM

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Thanks everyone, and I felt the exact dame way about the ending, I wish it could have been longer and such but it was an afternoon lets get it done type deal. I might revisit it because the first part gets me excited haha

Mar 15, 2013 | 05:05 PM

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You should have used a tripod for the still shots of the vehicles. As mentioned, the ending was severely lacking. I would have at least expected a badass burnout or something.